joi, 3 mai 2012

Homework for XA--deadline 10th of May 2012

Write a composition discussing the advantages and disadvantages of using the internet. Do not write more than 250 words. Post your writings as comments to this post. Thank you!

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  1. Internet has advantages and disadvantages. Disadvantages starting with Spam and effect until they can share the secrets of the innocent children who are looking for 'friends' in obscure areas of Internet chat. Disadvantages
    security information that we disclose - surf the Internet provide information that can get in unwanted places. Computer virus, damage relationships with family, etc..
    But the Internet has incredible benefits - is a great educational and informative environment. I refer to centers that provide 'continuous
    education' (virtual classroom) and the billions of pages of information available. Internet is an invaluable source of education for countries
    like India, Romania, which allows them to approximate the top professional and cultural level of advanced countries.
    Not to mention the rapid communication between the farthest points and seemingly less accessible globally. Geographical isolation no longer exists because of the Internet. Latest news, weather, we can find out immediately
    through the Internet. Just a tip: do not let the Internet control your life. We must have control
    of himself and must know how to use it in their own benefit. Although it might be a source of unhappiness.

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    1. The structure of the essay is not quite ok.
      are you sure you are the author of this piece of writing?

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  2. Nowadays almost everyone in the world have had a contact with computers. A great part of them has been using international computer’s net known as Internet .I think using internet has more advantages then disadvantages. First of all, Internet provides access to a lot of information. Some of them are very useful in your job other helps in your hobby. Searching the net with Google, you can find everything you want .You need only to select what you want, fill in some forms and click ok. In a few days you will get what you have ordered directly to your home, without going anywhere. You can pay with your credit internet banks give you insurance against unauthorized transaction. Beside a lot of advantages, Internet has some disadvantages too. First of disadvantages is that people who spend too much time sitting in the front of computer can easily gets ill. Radiation emitted by computer’s screen is harmful to eyes. People who spend too much time at their are getting weaker. Sitting for a long time is also harmful to the spine. Second disadvantage is that Internet can by addictive. Some people just can’t live without it. They have no real friends and when Internet is down they are getting furious .Internet has some opponents but more and more people treats Internet like telephone, or radio. They use it for fun and work, and I think at present living without internet would be quite difficult.

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  3. Internet is a quick means and easily accessible,used by a large number of persons.Internet has the ability to measure how many people have accesed a website or an online store.Is a very flexible means of communication that allows people who are great distances communicate.People can pay and they can order almost anything online.People can watch movies online,people can read newspapers online.
    One of the disavantages of internet is addictive.Internet can break of the real world on people.Parents not to be bothered by their children haves the children at computer.In virtual world of internet there people who take advantage of children.

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    1. "quick means" of what?
      you forgot to use the subject "it" in the 3rd sentence; it also needs rephrasing
      you have no conclusion
      over all, congratulations because I'm sure you are the real writer of this composition!

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  4. From the begining i want to point the polarity of internet effects, but despite of the fact that there are more positive effects than the negative impacts, i want to talk more about the disadvantages of using the cybernetic virtual world.
    It's very strange that the statistics shows an increase of young users who become addicted to games, pornography and movies, so they spend a lot of time in front of a screen on dirty sites.Also the statistcs shows that the average hours spent on internet by romanian teenagers users have reached up to 9-10 hours per day - and this is a disaster, here appears the disadvantages:
    1. This generation of kids, especially the under 16-s, are strongly manipulated and they haven't a childfood full of adventure and colors..they spent all their time in front of their computers gaming and chating.
    2. It happens when i talk to a kid to observe with wonder that he doesn't know how to communicate, he speaks more with his hands than with his mouth.
    3. Is incredible when you see kids spending time on social networks and they deceive themselves with the ideea that they have hundreds of friends, but in reality..they are alone in their room and when they go out in the real world they are dissatisfied.
    4. There exist also the danger of being a victim of an abuse or kidnapping or burglary after someone stole your personal data by hackers.
    And i can continue this list so on.
    Of course there are many advantages: access to information, talking with someone far etc.
    Don't forget!!! YOU MUST BE THE MASTER OF THE INTERNET, YOU GET USE OF HIM, SO DON'T BE A SLAVE OF THE INTERNET!

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    1. -statistics show, not shows
      -in a composition, you must not insert numbers, bullets or whatever (this is a characteristic of reports); turn these numbers into full paragraphs
      -overall, very good composition!

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  5. Acest comentariu a fost eliminat de autor.

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  6. The Internet offers a lot of advantages for a modern person. It makes life easier,helps save time, money or gives way to spend time pleasantly .Unfortunately, Internet use presents certain problems, dangers which is very good that everyone who use it, to know and to beware of them. So, in my opinion, these are the main advantages and disadvantages of the Internet:
    First of all, Internet provides access to a lot of information. You can also do shopping using Internet and pay bills without having to sit for hours at queues. Next advantage of internet is email. You can email whatever you want, movies, photos, songs, computer programs etc. Sending an email is much cheaper then phoning, or sending normal letters.
    Beside a lot of advantages, Internet has some disadvantages too. First of disadvantages is that people who spend too much time sitting in the front of computer can easily gets ill.
    Sitting a for long time is also harmful to the spine. Radiation emitted by computer's screen is harmful to eyes
    Second disadvantage is that Internet can by addictive.
    People use internet for fun and work, and I think at present living without internet would be quite difficult.

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    1. you lose your paragraphs towards the end of your writing
      are you sure you are the one who wrote the essay?

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  7. Crisan Claudiu9 mai 2012 la 10:37

    We hear every step that the internet is incredible, the Internet is irreplaceable, the Internet is the greatest thing that man has invented, and also hear the internet is the devil's hand, the Internet alters the mentality and behavior of children, the Internet creates dependence, and so on.
    The first and perhaps most important advantage would be that now allows people on long distances, to communicate real time with people in any country or location in the world and that with the push of a button we can find any information at any time.
    I could go on and list the advantages that we can pay and order almost anything online. We need a simple account and of course money. We can watch movies online, we can read the press, we can find a wealth of information wanted and unwanted.
    Like everything, the Internet, should also have disadvantages, such as dependency created by the Internet nonstop, obsession created step by step because we spend too much time on the Internet. All together we can say that because the Internet we can "peel" the real world we can create a virtual world that can come only who we want. All because of too much state of the computer, Internet and therefore we have time, vision problems, and social adaptation.

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    1. the last 2 sentences could serve you as the conclusion, in a separate paragraph

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  8. Internet is defined as a collection of various services and resources.Internet has tremendous potential and a lot to offer in tems of services.However, like every single inovation in science and technology,Internet has its own advantages and disadvantages.
    INTERNET ADVANTAGES:
    -Faster communication;
    -Informatoin resources;
    -Entertaiment;
    -Online Services.
    INTERNET DISADVANTAGES:
    -Theft of Personal Information;
    -Virus Threat;
    -Social Deconnect.

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    1. this is not a composition, it is more like a list! you will have to learn how to write a composition1

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  9. Acest comentariu a fost eliminat de autor.

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  10. Internet
    From my perspective the Internet is an extremely versatile means of communication that has the ability to immediately change the contents of the message and can react immediately under competitive pressure impulse. Is a quick and easily accessible information used by a number of increasingly more people. Of course where there are advantages and disadvantages must be, of course they are less than the benefits. It is a good means of information but also a means bad information. Given that it is a very popular means of information and access security information they convey is getting weaker because browsing on the Internet provide information that may reach unintended places. In Romania, the Internet has penetrated relatively slowly long been considered an unnecessary luxury. We hear every step that : "the internet is incredible as "the internet is irreplaceable " ,"the internet is the greatest thing that man has invented a ", also heard as "the internet is hand devil "," internet mentality and behavior altering children "," addictive internet ", and so on. But what is true ? The true is that the Internet is good. There is no devil's hand is not the coolest thing that man has invented. It is simply an information aid, aid knowledge from my point of view, but must take into account certain rules that do not have small problems. These rules would be to take care not to become addicted to the Internet because it's the easiest thing that can happen, you should regularly access the internet but little and of course would be to use it properly, not useless and the lack of occupation . I think we should not let the Internet control your life. We must have control of himself and must know how to use it in their own benefit. Although it might be a source of unhappiness.

    COZMA LOREDANA

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  11. The internet has both advantages and desadvantages.Some advantages are relation and communicating with your loved ones wherever they are located.It can be used as an informer strictly necessary students to school and all the people who are looking for information.Internet costs are very low.You can get the package offer with internet or modene.This is very useful as a source of information and very influential on a child.
    I believe that two three hours is enough for a child to spend on the internet.If you become addicted and to spoil your relationships with parents,friends,colleagues.
    Another disadvantages can be viruses who affecting your computer.In most cases the date of many people end up in unwanted places.
    Many people make the internet a job,a hobby that would in most caces have serious negative,efects track.

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    1. Oltean Cristina

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    2. congratulations for not copying and pasting directly from the internet
      -you have some problems in your writing, though
      -structure is inadequate
      -unclear paragraphs

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  12. The internet has both advantages and desadvantages.Some advantages are relation and communicating with your loved ones wherever they are located.It can be used as an informer strictly necessary students to school and all the people who are looking for information.Internet costs are very low.You can get the package offer with internet or modene.This is very useful as a source of information and very influential on a child.
    I believe that two three hours is enough for a child to spend on the internet.If you become addicted and to spoil your relationships with parents,friends,colleagues.
    Another disadvantages can be viruses who affecting your computer.In most cases the date of many people end up in unwanted places.
    Many people make the internet a job,a hobby that would in most caces have serious negative..efects track.
    Oltean Cristina

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  13. I learned about internet few years ago and how i know which are the advantages and disadvantages of using this masive store of information.
    Despite the information you can dowbload,which helps you,often you can be a victim of a virus which destroys your software.
    An advantage is the possibility of using social networks which keeps you in contact with your friends,famyly and others.
    Another advantage is online shopping,very good aspect because of the time that you win.
    We heaved about internet users being abused or victims of burglaries that`s a lad effect.
    A disadvantage is becoming addicted to internet(gaming,etc..).

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    1. you lack conclusion
      -you have to develop a little more your ideas, so that you can form paragraphs

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  14. Advantages of Internet
    Is a quick and easily accessible information and is used for a highly flexible means of communication used by most people.
    The Internet has the ability to "carry" complex advertisements, which can simultaneously contain text, image and sound in the desired proportion. Global advertising campaigns have the greatest range on the internet.
    Today most people communicate through the Internet even some businesses are due to Internet.
    Disadvantages of the Internet:
    A disadvantage of the Internet is security information that we disclose it can get where we not want. Viruses are also a disadvantage because we can break the internet operating system.
    Some people become addicted to the internet and life without the internet there would be practical and that I could say that Internet addiction is a disadvantage.
    Bodean Marius

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    1. inadequate structure
      -lack of conclusion
      -grammar problems

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  15. The Internet is named after the Internet Protocol,the standard communication protocol used by every computer on the Internet.The Internet can powerfully leverage your ability to find,manage,and share information.Never before in human history has such a voluable resource been availabe to so many people at such little cost.
    Advantages of the Internet:
    -E-mail,Access Information,Shopping,Online Chat.
    Disadvantages of the Internet:
    -Personal Information,Pornography,Spamming.
    NITU RAMONA

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    1. -this is not quite an essay!
      -you have to develop more your ideas into real paragraphs

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  16. Point pro: We can to advise very plain and easy and we find utile things.
    We can find positive and educational things. From inthernet i can take and find a book, a piece of poetry , old music, wich i can’t find anywhere.
    The inthernet is used to unbosom us.
    There are the forums where every body can learn something from another experiences. Point anti inthernet is level of pornography in progressive increase, addictive and another.

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  19. Internet has been perhaps the most outstanding innovation in the field of communication in the history of mankind. As with every single innovation, internet has its own advantages and disadvantages. But usually, greater magnitude of advantages outweighs its disadvantages.
    The foremost target of Internet has always been speedy communication and it has excelled way beyond the expectations. Newer innovations are only going to make it faster and more reliable.Information is probably the biggest advantage that Internet offers. Internet is a virtual treasure trove of information. Any kind of information on any topic under the sun is available on the Internet. One cannot imagine an online life without Facebook or Twitter. Social networking has become so popular amongst youth that it might one day replace physical networking.
    But it isn't only milk and honey when it comes to the internet. The internet has got it's own downsides like theft of personal information. If you use the Internet for online banking, social networking or other services, you may risk a theft to your personal information such as name, address, credit card number etc. Another disadvantage of the internet is the phenomenon called "social disconnect". Thanks to Internet, people now only meet on social networks. More and more people are getting engulfed in virtual world and drifting apart from their friends and family.
    But after all, my opinion is that the internet is more useful than harming.

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  20. The Internet has a lot of advantages.It provides many opportunities, and can be used for a variety of things. Any kind of information on any topic is available on the Internet. Instead of wasting time in libraries, in net the information can be found very quickly. What is more you can send and receive e-mails, your messages are delivered instantly to people anywhere in the world, unlike traditional mail that takes a lot of time, also get in touch with your friends. One more good point is that you can download any software, music, movies, games from the internet. So internet also provides entertainment.
    On the other hand internet has disadvantages. If you use the Internet, your personal information can be accessed by other people. If you use a credit card to shop online, then your credit card information can also be stolen. A very serious problem of the Internet (especially for young children) is that it is full of pornography and violence. One more big disadvantage is that while downloading any software you can download and get viruses.
    All things considered advantages overweight disadvantages of internet. If we know how to secure our information, computer and ourselves, we can use internet and feel joy, but we shouldn`t forget about it`s disadvantages as well.

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