As i told you in class earlier today, your homework is to submit a composition with the title:"My dream job is...". Please, complete your title and do not write more than 300 words. Do not forget about the general outline of a composition:introduction, body and conclusion!
Submit your homework as comments to this post, no later than the deadline mentioned in my title. Thank you!
Submit your homework as comments to this post, no later than the deadline mentioned in my title. Thank you!
My dream job is to be a hairdresser
RăspundețiȘtergereI love this job because a hairdresser has a big influence in people`s lifes.A good haircut could make you look better and be more attractive,but alsoa bad haicut could make you look ugly.
This job is a very usefull job for that ho have a lot of imagination.Hairdresser needs to be creative and knou to speak with people to find out what they want.You can express yourself through the haircut and you can always try new thinngs.You can never getting bored because you can participate to a lot of competition and contest and you always can learn more.
In conclusion I would like to be a good hairdresser.
-"life-live"--this is the plural
Ștergere-good ideas, but you have to develop them a little, so that paragraphs are longer, not just one sentence!
My dream job is to be a dentist
RăspundețiȘtergereI want to be dentist becasue this is a profitable job.I must to go through several steps to become a dentist but final results will satisfy me. I love people with perfect teeth.
As for every job I need dedication becasue this is the kay to success.Dental work requires theoretical knowledge, manual skills and people-centered service attitude.This is a complex job that requires attention. This is a high salary job, many people pay a lot of money to have a nice smile and excellent healthy in their teeth. Also, I love tihs job because I don't like to work in a factory,I like work for myself.I want to have my own dental clinic.
It is easy to say "When I grow up, I want to be a good dentist", but the most important to know when we think in our dream job are talents or abilities we have. I hope in the future to realize that this job suits me.
In the end I hope my dream come true.
By: Murariu Alexnadra-Andreea
-"becasue" is in fact--"because"
Ștergere-I just love your last ideas!
-pay attention to spelling!
My dream joc is to be a Chef.
RăspundețiȘtergereI want to be because chef is a job good from my point of view.I'm learning to do food after your like and at the same time receive a reasonable salary to say so.Normally, to be a good chef must have and a bit of inclination towards the job.And I finally got to have my own restaurant and if you can and got through strainatete with different specialitari.Should I do a college education to reach the status that is natural.I finally try my chance to be chef of this country and I reach Valle of having his own restaurant and why and more, will expect to a meal.Finally I hope that my dream of chef to fulfill.
by Lalu Marian
-pay attention to layout, your composition does not have clear paragraphs!
Ștergere-pay attention to grammar and word order, you need to rephrase your piece of work and develop it, because it is too short
My dream job is surgeon
RăspundețiȘtergereYou ask: why surgeon?
Simple ,when I know what is life,I want help peoaple,never mind if they have or haven’t mony(in special pauper peoaple, haven’t condition to life).
Anther asks are is how I can help peoaple, what need peoaple and can do this?
Peoaple are so frighten by hurt and dead .
When peoaple feel something wrong whit them body, go to doctor or when have an accident they base on surgeon.
Peoaple need to know: somebody have care to them, somebody who fite whit ill for them and don’t want something for this.
I belive whit all my body, whit all my soul I can do this because I want to do this for rest of my life
Surgeon fite whit ill but thei don’t know counter who fite.
This job is and for mw soul because I thinck is so ticklish, so complicated and need a person who want give him for this job. And I love to see peoaple who suffer and I can help them .
I wanna be the best surgeon but not of the hospital or the country, just for peoaple.
So after ten years you find me in hospital !
by Stanisor Sorina
-try not to translate from Romanian into English--you will not have a good English language in the end
Ștergere-develop your ideas into paragraphs, don't leave sentences to hang in there by themselves!
-"fite" is "fight"?
-pay attention to spelling--you mistyped some words
My dream job is Head of Sales
RăspundețiȘtergereIn this job to earn well, is an easy job I like to buy things cheap and sell them expensive to pull a profit almost nothing.
Head of Sales has a great responsibility and a lot to worry about if you get the goods about or if it ends too quickly is not a fun job work be taken seriously and be respected rules.
Working on a fixed schedule must not waste time in addition to the job.
Have to recommend this job
by Szabo Ricardo
-your composition is too short; develop your ideas and arrange them clearly into paragraphs--this looks more like a telegram!
Ștergere-pay attention to grammar
My dream jos is Doctor
RăspundețiȘtergereIf we are to define ‘’job’’ the dictionary meaning of it would be “A job is the work the someone doesto eran money” or “A job is a particular task”.
The dream job is the target everybody would like to reach but few of us actually live the dream. The exeplanation is simple: it takes a lot of effort and hard work as well as siriousness and passion to achieve it.
All the children are dreaming to become doctors, techers, policemen, or lowyers but very few of them succed in fulfilling their dream.
I my case I’m not an exception, yes my dream job si being a doctor. I don’t have a logical explanation for my chice. I feel, I need to do this. I realised this while I was waching all kinds of documentaries and TV shows about the medical world.
For me this job is very noble and I like to help people. I have a lot to say and do in this field. Medicine has to evolve always whit every doctor and every pacient. I’m aware and and this is why I want to do this job. Therefor I invest my energy in learning and disovering things which are necessary for my education.
Consequently dreaming is easy but achieving a dream is difficult. Especially about things which are very important in life such as having the “dream job”
by Teo Ciulu
-good composition!
ȘtergereMy dream job is to be the seller. Seller life is a life with many responsibilities
RăspundețiȘtergereSeller mainly deals with communication with clients store (point of sale), the organization of the general store opening and closing activity (point of sale), making sales, collecting value of goods, packaging and related services sales, promoting the image store (point of sale), maintaining stocks and currency reserve requirements, check stock with sales, preparing documents related sales activity and sales activity reporting.
by Pipos Adrian
-this is not a composition, only a bunch of sentences put together!
Ștergere-this is not your idea, it is copied from somewhere!
-I do not aproove your "homework"!
My dream jos is to be a profesionall snooker player ! :>
RăspundețiȘtergereWhy that ?!
First of all it`s not really a job , it`s a easy way to earn money , you have the oportunity to visit most of the world (many cities , countries) . But this game/job is not for everyone , you need a lot of strategy and calm . It takes a lot of waiting time , you need to be focus and your mind must be on the game , and of course you should take an eye on your oponent . I usually hang out with my friends and we go and playing pool , pool it`s not really snooker but most of all it`s the same . Both games have the same ideea: to put the balls into the holes . The golden rule : the black bool or number 8 ball must be put into to hole at the end , if you put the ball into the hole earlier you lose . So I repeat being a snooker player it`s really relaxing (earn easy money,visit the world) I`m just saying I can`t know it for sure !.
So if you are a calm person , full with strategy you can easy become a profesionall snooker player !. (i guess)
BY Silviu Motca !. :)
- pay attention to layout, please!
Ștergere-develop your ideas a bit more!
My dream job is architect.
RăspundețiȘtergereI’ll tell you why. It’s not that simple to know what to do in your life. But when you love what you do it’s easy to realize your dream . That’s my case too. When I create and design a house plan, I feel like I’ll never stop. I always have ideas to make a new one. It’s like a game for me and I want to play it again and again.
To create and design a house it’s wonderful , but to imagine a lifestyle spent in it, it’s fascinating . The satisfaction in this work is at high cotes ,but you need to take the best choices .
Maybe it’s hard to become an architect, but if I like it that much I am sure I can keep up. I don’t care if it’s a profitable job or not (but I know it is),I will always try to do what makes me happy. A dedicate work ,it’s the easiest … and the happiest as well.
I will try hard to make my dream come true.
By Lazaroiu Aurelia
- develop your ideas a bit more, so that you can have full paragraphs, especially the conclusion
Ștergere-the expression is not "high cotes", but "high rates", or you have to paraphrase/ explain/replace it
bhl bhj.
RăspundețiȘtergereMY DREAM JOB IS TO BEACOME A PILOT
RăspundețiȘtergereAfter i graduate the piloting academy my dream has almos get true.
Me and my academy classmate,we're standing in the waiting room to
get our repartition.With a day before,all big air company send
there managgers to recruit pilot from the fresh gratuate.I was
hope that my result to impres the rpresentative of an big company.
IN my childhood i was watching at the project of development
of the air-sheep Airbus380,the bigest air-sheep of all time.
The excitment was doubled when the instructor get us the envelope
wih the repartition on the company that we will gone work to.
in my luck i was repartizated to work for the company from my town
where they have the air-sheep of my dreams.In the next day i've
start the training at the company.After three monts of practice
i finaly beacome a true pilot on the air-sheep Airbuss380.
This imaginary text I managed to show how much work must file an ordinary man to become a pilot.
I hope the above composition parts you understand which is my dream job, and who knows maybe that text happens!
Thank's for reading
BY :NICHIFOR STEFAN
-rearrange your ideas--they're a bit messy!
Ștergere-thanks for writing your composition, it is a good one!
My dream job is to become a doctor.
RăspundețiȘtergereMany people think that becoming a doctor is difficult.Others have some sense that becoming a physician takes many years and is expensive.Most people realize that it is difficult yet rewarding beacouse you earn a lot of money and you have the chance to live life at its fullest.All these peaople are correct.
One day i went to the hospital because i was sick as i waited i saw a doctor treat a little childe ho just broke his leg prety bad.In that moment i was enspired i wanted to be just like that doctor to help people and save lives.
From then on i dedicated my self to my cause.I finnished colledge and then got to work as a resident in a hospital.
In my first day there i got to treat my very first pacient it was one of the most fulfilling moments of my life.
Hope you liked my dream and i hope it becomes reality.
Thanks for reading.
By:Lukacs Gabi
-pay attention to "I"; write it with a major letter
Ștergere-good composition, please develop your ideas a bit more!
thanks for writing!
My dream job is to become professional football player.
RăspundețiȘtergereIt would be great to get paid lots of money every week for doing something that I love. I need to train every day. I would love to play for the big teams in the world. I want to play as an midfielder and score lots of goals. Our team would be so good that we would win the Champion’s League and all the competitions. I would travel all around the world and play lots of different teams. I think that this would be the best job in the world.
By: Sîrghie Tiberiu
-develop your idea more--this doesn't lokk like a composition to me!
Ștergere-you have to re-think your piece of writing
My dream job is to be the next Doctor Who.
RăspundețiȘtergereTo travel through time and space to explore galaxies in the universe with my blue box called TARDIS.Meeting new species and to save panels and civilization in danger.
To fight the invincible Daleks `s, and the vast army of cyborgs that threatens life in the universe. This adventurous job I want to practice in my hole life.
-who is ScorpYox? you have to sign your paper, please!
Ștergere-the same remarks as for your mate above, Tibi!
My dream job is to become a professional actress.
RăspundețiȘtergereSince I was very young I liked to watch movies and many times I thought they were real happenings.
After I grew up and learn't that it's just acting, I was still impressed by their talent but even more atracted by the fact that these actors,some could earn even millions of dollars in what seemed to be a very fun job to do.
Some say it's extremely hard to become succesfull in acting no matter what ,some say it takes physical appeal, others say talent, others say charm but I'm not discouraged by these. I might not have much of the charm or physical appeal or talent or ties with the producers but I have seen alot of people like me that got a lucky role, had a bit of inspiration and ended up rich ,famous and happy.
The quality that I have is a great hope that I can succeed, be it luck, beauty, talent or anything else. Afterall it's my dream job. Until I reach it, I might have to go through other jobs. If I keep my hopes all this time, I'm sure to succeed once I get a chance. The fact that one day I too can play a role and make it look like it's actually a real deal on screen,makes it worthwhile all the trouble to get there.
A friend told me we are all acting, no matter what job we have.He might be right !
- "learn't" is in fact "learnt"
Ștergere-good composition, but please develop your last idea, to become a paragraph
My dream job is to be pediatrician!
RăspundețiȘtergereWhy? Because I love children and I want to help them as I can more. Is a difficult job because you need to know more about how the body works and life of a child is in your hands. Have to learn a lot but worth it because it is a well paid job.
This is the job that I want to when I was a kid , with many dreams and ideals. I hope to succeed in what I wanted and I hope that I will make many healthy children.
By Livia :)
-develop your ideas, so that they can become full paragraphs and form a composition!
Ștergere-this is too short!
My dream job is doctor
RăspundețiȘtergereEverything starts with a small wish and continues with intense study.This job consits more branches offering people a wide range of wich can choose the job suits them (cardiologist, dermatologist, endocrinologist, neurologist, pediatrician, pulmonologist, psychiatrist, surgeon, etc …).This job is a noble profession because doctor working with people and have to be as generous with them.
My favorite job is doctor because you need to work with different people who have differnet problems.It's necessary for each person to be heard by a doctor who rezolved his problems.Patient problems need to be rezolved with very much attention and must give them the correct treatment for this recover the sittuation .A right treatment help people problems but everything depends of his ability.
This job is very important for society because it helps to keep society healty.Healty is necessary for all why doctors need more respect.
Doctor is a very difficult job because you need know very well everything about this domain and you must be very patient with patients.For become doctor you need a lot of school and practice.
Those who want to become doctors can born with this talent in the blood but are many people who acquire this skill.In both cases chance are equal and in both cases get very good doctors.
...I choose this job because not a boring job but needs a lot of work we have to dedicate.
By Coconete Andreea :)
very good composition!
ȘtergereMy dream job is...teacher
RăspundețiȘtergereMy favorite job is ... teacher because I really like children. I love to take care of children. I'm not too good at it, but I know that if I try, I will succeed. I love the teachers job because she has to teach and explain many things like sons how to count from one to one hundred, how to write his name, as if the difference between cardinal and ordinal numbers and my favorite part is when a teacher teaches his students to do what is right and what is wrong in life.
I still love this job, because a teacher must teach their children, many songs such as "Alunelul", "chu chu train", "your birthday Mommy", "The peasant's on the field", and many carols. For a teacher it is important to organize and celebrations for each event of the year: the first kindergarten Say, Christmas, Easter, March 8, June 1, last Say kindergarten, and halaween site where all children come masking characters on they love them. At each of these events, teacher teaches children to recite poems, songs, or dance. One of my favorite tracks at a festival, is when the teacher encourages the children because some of them do not have courage to express themselves through poems and songs in front of a group of people. Another favorite part of my is when, at the end of every festivities, the teacher gets a lot of flowers, because I love flowers. And finally, parents satisfaction is what satisfies any teacher.
By Amisculesei Diana .
- you have no conclusion
Ștergere-good composition, though!
My dream job would be a professional tennis player.
RăspundețiȘtergereThis job involves a lot of practice, but the profit would be big enough, you become known in the world and visit new cities that you dream to visit, by means official tournaments .
Originally from England, in the late nineteenth century, tennis has spread first to English people, especially in the rich upper class.
Tennis is now an Olympic sport and is played regardless of money, age in many countries around the globe.
Tennis is an enjoyable game in terms of how to play, can be double or simple, simply seems to me more aggressive, that is more beautiful for me to watch and play.
When I hear tennis makes me to feeling of happiness, yet practically tennis in my free time, but I dream to confront the "heavy's players" in world tennis.
-develop your ideas a bit more!
Ștergere-your ideas are messy, they do not seem to connect to one another---they seem to be copied from various sources1
My dream job is to be a tourism agent.
RăspundețiȘtergereI like to travel and i really love to communicate with diffrent people. It's my dream job beacause it includes everything i love the most : to socialize, to travel , to learn interesting things. Also is a very profitable job.
There's nothing else to say about it just that i really want this job and i will make all the necessary things to obtain it.
-develop your ideas--this is not a full composition, only a bunch of sentences put together; re-think your piece of writing
Ștergeremy dream job is to be a lawyer .
RăspundețiȘtergereI want to be a lawyer because i love to do right.I hate when the inocent people end up paying for the mistakes of others.
The lawyers earn very many money,but it is only detail.This job is complicated but at the same time is very exciting.
I recommend everyone this job because we need people to protect human right.(i'm sorry but i forgot to post my homework)
-the same as for Ana Maria!
Ștergere